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         \begin{abstract}
             The Fenceless Grazing Collar system aims to reduce the amount of work
-            needed by farmers to keep herds of grazing animals. Throughout the
-	    Fall term, our team has conducted research into the specifics of our
-	    project which culminated in a complete design detailing exactly how
-	    the project will be implemented. Work was spread out over the ten weeks,
-	    with the ultimate goal of completing the required plan prior to 
-	    implementation. Throughout the term, our team completed progress reports
-	    in order to document our progress. This has been assembled into this
-	    one document, detailing our work throughout the Fall term.
-        \end{abstract}
+            needed by farmers to keep herds of grazing animals. During the fall
+	    term our team defined the problem that needs to be solved, drafted
+	    a document detailing the requirements of the project, and completed
+	    a design document and review with our client. Our client for this 
+	    project has approved our design, setting us on the path of 
+	    purchasing hardware. One of the largest issues we have encountered
+	    during the Fall term was a lack of funding, which will limit
+	    our ability to purchase hardware in the near future. Our team will
+	    solve this problem through constant communication with our TA and
+	    Dr. Winters.
+	\end{abstract}
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 \end{titlepage}